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The Artist's Dream
Contributed by
wheels
on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 06:02:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Rembrandt lay in an oozing pool
Of luscious oily colors
His head hung
between his shoulders drooping.
Still tied to his creation
In honey thick strands
Of membranous hues
Melting from his finger tips
He cried.
And the masses gathered
Behind their idol
To worship
That which would become a pillar of beauty
A masterpiece
Of that which they could not see
Nor understand.
As they praised his glorious feat
With insipid words of wisdom
He sobbed in defeat
You do not understand! he cried
It is still not as good
as the dream.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-06-20 06:02:19]
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Re: The Artist's Dream
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 06:29:52 AM AEST
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A lovely write i like where the images took me
our dreams are as never quite as they seem and trying for them makes it so harder
let the dreams come to you
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Re: The Artist's Dream
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by shelby on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 06:39:15 AM AEST
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I do so love your color of words.
Brilliant write.
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Re: The Artist's Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 07:49:33 AM AEST
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Loved the imagery I got from this.... Well done..
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Re: The Artist's Dream
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by Supercreep on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 08:36:12 PM AEST
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| Like the way you only really reveal the meaning of the poem in the last lines. As with your other work you have a good sense of poetic economy. |
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Re: The Artist's Dream
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 12:41:44 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed your use of imagery here. Rhyme scheme and meter flowed nicely. Enjoyed the read.
Peace,
~Shannon |
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