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Deep in the Heart of Me
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 03:30:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Drops fall from bloodshot eyes
As the same blood in tears does form
Just as rain does fall from darkened skies
Upon the wind of a passing storm
A stone-hinged heart peers through a bleeding soul
As windows open up to let in the rain
As anger flows and thunder through the heavens roll
Walls crumble and crack as the weary mind goes insane
From those eyes a crimson river continually does flow
As standing on the shore watching storm clouds roll back in
This ocean of anger and pain ever continues to grow
Where nothing ever ends and nothing new seems to begin
Through my eyes the outside world so easily do they see
As white capped waves against the walls of my mind collide
It can no longer be concealed deep within the heart of me
And all I can say with my last breath is that I tried
Knowing where to look but unable to see the path
Upon myself I unleash my wrath
2008
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Re: Deep in the Heart of Me
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by Supercreep on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 06:14:56 PM AEST
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For a poem about anger and pain this is surprisingly beautiful. Not so sure about persistently using the image of bleeding eyes though it is a good one..But particularly like the vastness and mysteriousness of these lines: 'Where nothing ever ends and nothing new seems to begin' and
'As white capped waves against the walls of my mind collide'
cheers,
SC
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Re: Deep in the Heart of Me
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by mecatpurrson on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 07:08:41 PM AEST
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| Your last line "Upon myself I unleash my wrath" is so true! People who hurt do take their anger out on themselves. |
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Re: Deep in the Heart of Me
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 09:03:16 PM AEST
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Rich,
Another powerful piece. Well written. Some times the best thing is to let it out and not keep it burried. Do not unleash on yourself if it is not warranted. Glad to see the post.
Deadwriter
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Re: Deep in the Heart of Me
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 12:23:37 AM AEST
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truly beautiful, a well woven poem that anyone with a heart will identify with:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Deep in the Heart of Me
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 05:44:36 AM AEST
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Incredibly painful... I see what you mean, Rich.... I can truly identify....
Jenni |
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Re: Deep in the Heart of Me
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 07:57:22 AM AEST
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Rich,
this is a tear jerker, you and I are a lot alike in this way.
We at times can be our own worst enemy. I am finding ways to fix it, I will share some things. It is hard at first but as time goes by it makes sense and it becomes easy to put into place.
I agree we cannot unleash on others, (we both know this) we also cannot unleash on ourselves.
Ocean of anger...... that is so solid, I relate to that also.
Lately mine has been tears though but that comes from stuffing so many things it has to surface somewhere.
Profound and incredible write.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Deep in the Heart of Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 05:26:04 PM AEST
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| As I have read many angry poems from you, I would like to read your poetry after you forgive yourself and let go of your anger. If you write like this when you are down on yourself, I could only imagine what wonderful lines you would write when you are happy. Great write..........Mike |
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Re: Deep in the Heart of Me
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by safetyinnumbers on
Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 05:07:03 PM AEST
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A deep and dark write....really nice work, Anthony |
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