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The Circle..*
Contributed by
hannah_heaven
on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 04:22:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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hearts flutter
hands sweat
there she is
all in white
hair up tight
walking down
eyes meet
the last time
as just girl and boy
now its to become
man and wife
shes at my side
tears falling
joy not sad
fear maybe
of becoming
one.
hand in hand
ring
the cirlce
infinitive
we are one
married,
my wife and i.
Copyright ©
hannah_heaven
... [
2008-06-21 04:22:11]
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Re: The Circle..*
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by kelly_may on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 07:45:12 PM AEST
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| well written bit short though |
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Re: The Circle..*
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 25th January 2019 @ 03:41:02 AM AEST
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Great style and flow. I loved it. What does short have to
do with anything???? |
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