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~ I ~ The Mighty River
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 08:19:14 PM in AEST
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~ I ~ The Mighty River
I am a mighty river flowing strong and true
Today I am this river because of each of you
Starting out as a drop, one of Mother Natures tears
I have grown and transformed over each of my living years
Each person who I have encountered along the way
Have been like a tributary to me and continue through this day
There have been some who have carried muddy storm waters into my life
I have learned that soon down stream clearer waters will enter and dissipate the strife
I have been worried of late that my journey may be coming to an end
As the waters have slowed their flow, as I was telling a writing friend
They gave me some stern words that have begun to change my point of view in full
Even if we run out of words we will create something even more beautiful!
So as this river quietly sinks underground and away from your sight and mind
Remember I have always tried to be gentle, giving and kind
When it is time for my return transformed as the rains showers
I am here to nurture your souls to become those magnificent colorful flowers
Deadwriter
06/21/2008
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Re: ~ I ~ The Mighty River
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 08:31:53 PM AEST
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AWESOME!! Simply magnificent...
Jenni_K
*Gets a HUGE bottle and fills it with water from this Mighty River*... |
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Re: ~ I ~ The Mighty River
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by Voice of the Silent on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 09:50:22 PM AEST
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Great write I liked the symbolism
I hope you get through this time and
all journeys end
but it's just a starting point for another to begin |
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Re: ~ I ~ The Mighty River
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by shelby on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 07:38:33 AM AEST
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Words true as they get.
A beautiful write my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: ~ I ~ The Mighty River
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by SilverRain on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 09:50:12 PM AEST
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Downright amazing.
Loved it!
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Re: ~ I ~ The Mighty River
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 03:35:03 PM AEST
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I have to agree with everyone else. This is amazing, beautiful and brilliant.
And truer words have never been spoken. I thank you my friend for you kindness and your words during my troubling time. I am glad to see your pen is flowing once more. Great write.
Rich |
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Re: ~ I ~ The Mighty River
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 01:32:51 AM AEST
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What a great metaphor!!!
And even more so, what a great image of life and living that we can all relate to! |
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Re: ~ I ~ The Mighty River
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by calebcrain on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 02:48:41 PM AEST
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| this is awesome i like how you ended it |
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Re: ~ I ~ The Mighty River
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by elle on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 02:24:51 PM AEST
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| lovely & inspiring. peace. elle |
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