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The phantom
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The Phantom
Tonight she waits expectantly
Imploring her lover to pay a call
Some say he is a spirit
No more than a shadow on the wall
She can never touch him
Never hold him in her arms
Ah but how well she knows his touch
She has surrendered to his charms
Tonight as she lie sleeping
The phantom will appear
And he will gently kiss her lips
Whisper Darling I am here
Immediately her heart is racing
Her pulse rapid and weak
She must not open her eyes
Dare not chance a peek
Her back arching gently
Moans escaping trembling lips
Her fires burning with abandon
Into ecstasy she slips
Just before the dawning
Before the first light of day
The Phantom will retreat
But never far away
Then she will awaken
To sunbeams dancing on the wall
The Phantom but a dream
She tries desperately to recall
But come the midnight hour
When shadows have their way
As her body trembles
The Phantom will play !
Russ
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Re: The phantom
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 04:14:35 PM AEST
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| i love the drama that unfolds in this, i think of an internet love affair, strange days these are indeed |
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Re: The phantom
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 07:34:39 PM AEST
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Russ, this is a beauty...
Where's my phantom????/
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Re: The phantom
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 12:44:39 AM AEST
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| I love this poem :))) Tonight I promise not to open my eyes ... |
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Re: The phantom
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:52:35 AM AEST
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Russ this was really terrific,well done!
Christina |
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Re: The phantom
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 12:42:48 PM AEST
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very good write, keep me spell bound
Sharon |
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Re: The phantom
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 06:13:20 PM AEST
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| ooooh i love this, it's like a hauntingly wonderful movie, yet, i know she's dreaming in this, the images are wonderful, please write more, this is so well done, huggs n' love, to you and yours, always nessa |
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Re: The phantom
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by Apartment213 on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 12:42:00 AM AEST
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| very poetic very different, different is always good!! |
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