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The Plastic Bubble
Contributed by
wheels
on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 04:09:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The night screamed
As it blinded me
With a flash of emptiness
And the thunder pounded pearls to ash.
I embraced the rain
As it bled into my dreams
A sanguineous fog
With the harbor lighthouse
Crashing solemnly into the sea.
Crimson stains upon the pavement
Puddle at my feet
As a damsels talons
Bore ravenously down
Upon her lovers upturned back.
The storm raged into darkness
And as I faced headlong
Into the rain
I tasted the sanguineous
Drops of moral deceit
While shards of glass
Cut cords of dependence
Into flotsam.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-06-23 04:09:01]
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Re: The Plastic Bubble
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 04:55:05 AM AEST
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I loved the word play this write is incredible.
A storm of nature a storm of personal emotions.
Incredible!
Huggers
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