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Without Woman
Contributed by
wheels
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Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 04:12:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Emptiness is empty beyond bearable
Without woman
Blue in blue shadows
Perspiring with desires alike
Afar
with wild dragonfly dreams
On wet-tongued wings
Swirling down the steamy crescent breaths.
Fly oh so wearily
Face down slowly
To her breast bare into the night
Slipping softly down the tender slopes
Heaving forth in frightful wonder.
Oh that I may plunge kisses
deeply within her heart
And come up
swimming in her arms
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-06-23 04:12:45]
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Re: Without Woman
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 08:21:07 AM AEST
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Simply breath taking write my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: Without Woman
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 12:06:38 AM AEST
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Holy HELL!!!!!!
Kevin, I have to say that last stanza is about one of the most brilliantly composed and poetically worded
stanzas I've ever read. Damn! Romance could DROWN in that stanza alone!
But the whole piece could drench your reader in sighs. From the title I expected something slightly different, but
was pleasantly surprised to behold something so poetically beautiful. It is like witnessing a sunset SO perfect,
you can't find the words to give it justice.
Bravo poet! A beautiful addition to your page. =)
~Breezy
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Re: Without Woman
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 01:31:42 PM AEST
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Now these are the poems I have wanted to
read from you. I knew with the passion you
write your dark stuff, your love writes would
be incredible and you didn't let me down.
Awesome............Mike |
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