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Oily Passions
Contributed by
wheels
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Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 06:37:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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And yet
I gaze upon her
As her eyes cascade love
In a sparkling blue waterfall
Falling haplessly into an oily abyss.
Then
She smiled
Sincere wanton
And with the pounding of a thousand steeds
Brilliantly across the heavens
Exposed an abyss all my own
Revealed in oily passions.
As her breath enveloped me
In a shower of tropical sensations
Under a humid moonlit sky
The pounding echoes
Wrought my hands to tremble.
Yes! Oh Yes!
Let me into the flowing pastures of your arms
To graze upon your beauty
Grant you the pleasures of your desire
Reaching beyond that abyss
With everything that which we are
Ecstasy in that which our hearts hold true.
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wheels
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2008-06-24 06:37:24]
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Re: Oily Passions
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 07:10:00 AM AEST
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Breath taking write.
I loved
Let me into the flowing pastures of your arms
To graze upon your beauty
brilliant wording there my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: Oily Passions
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 05:33:28 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. A picture in the mind full of deep passion.............Mike |
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Re: Oily Passions
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 07:52:36 PM AEST
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Such beautiful imagery!
I did stumble a bit on it in the latter part of the second stanza, but dam! well done! |
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Re: Oily Passions
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 01:20:49 AM AEST
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Really passionate write.. well written..
Jenni |
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