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Sedona Maxwell, you're way to gone
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 10:51:42 PM in AEST
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I hear it almost daily ten thousand times to say the least. I know I'm not that pretty and to me it's a sin to be without the looks and charms of Barbie. I'm not Barbie, I'm a sinner. If it takes me a hundred years to see your true colors I wouldnt wait a second. Cause darling you're too beautiful and I've lost the will to see you fall with all the rest. I've seen paint thinner with skin thicker than your's and I'm not lying either. Oh yea it's true. You're eyes are like glass and I'm afraid they might break. So fragile and so $%^& ***** up just the way your mom raised you. You've got a life you don't deserve a life fit for queens. I think I might be jealous or maybe it's these pills that keep me awake for 100 hours and asleep nearly none. I feel I haven't slept in days and I was lying--I don't pop pills. But I wish. Please can you rewind the part were you were dying, the blood pouring from your nose and your fingers too slow to stop it and I can see you pupils slowly dialating man that must suck. You're going to be famous now, all across the T.V. They'll make dolls that don't look like you but are supposed to be you with larger breast and a thinner waist and better hair and not so fake eyes, but eyelashes. The room has quit spinning now and I've lost my train of thought so I'm going to bed now. Not to pray but to sleep. I don't pray--maybe I should. Some other time. I'm too tired of thinking about ways to describe you. And with each word I write, it's getting even more difficult. I just really really really want to gouge out those eyes, and use them in a game of marbles.
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Re: Sedona Maxwell, you're way to gone
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by eeeitak on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 09:11:40 AM AEST
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this is really really cool! it's like a story, with the flow of poetry...
very original, never have i seen something like this.
the emotions are strong, and the way you phrase certain things are very clever.
point is, I LOVE THIS!
haha, take care :)
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