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Pretty Digits
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 11:03:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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I've had this sort of turn around.
I'm not dragged along anymore by anyone.
I'm not cheated
I'm not hated in the sense of understanding.
I've got 10 fingers all of which I can count my friends.
I've got 10 toes all of wich I can count my enemies.
It's always been the same;;always been equal.
The difference in you and myself
is that I'm not sad and pretend to be happy.
If anything I pretend to be sad sometimes only to seem normal.
The sky has thousands of eyes
to watch all your pretty little features
and all your pretty little smiles.
I've ended anything that can be considered false;
whether it be friendships,
or relationships that held on too long for no apparent reason
but to nit pick their eyes out and make their bodies crack each and everytime you step all over them.
I never did it on purpose,
and I never intended on hurting anyone;;
I still don't.
You may have thought or still think,
I'm some kind of smuggling *****
that can't walk without having her head stuck so far up someone elses ***,
but that's ok.
Because I love wasting every minute.
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Living_In_My_Dream
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2008-06-24 23:03:34]
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Re: Pretty Digits
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by lildancngurl on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 11:22:05 PM AEST
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It's good to get rid of the fake, impressive move.
I like the poem, good job :) |
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Re: Pretty Digits
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 01:02:17 AM AEST
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| I am impressed with the way this fell together. I can't put my finger on any line in particular, but the way you put it all together is very refreshing! |
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Re: Pretty Digits
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 04:41:08 PM AEST
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| This made my jaw DROP! incredible, really, one of my favorites ever. very unique, and truly stunning. great write! :) |
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