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Fallen
Contributed by
Chlois
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Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 04:39:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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No longer who i used to be.
Still not the person you knew.
Alone hidden in the darkness.
Blood dripping down my body.
Tears hitting her grave absorbed in the dirt.
Her body lying 10ft beneath my feet.
Fallen driven into th earth.
Her corpse drying up, trapped in her coffin.
Never will will i be with her.
She went to a place or joy and happiness.
My future lies in the pit of fire where no one heres my scream!
Copyright ©
Chlois
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2008-06-25 16:39:03]
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Re: Fallen
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by Miseria on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 03:06:23 AM AEST
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| This one was pretty interesting.. Keep it up, I liked it. |
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Re: Fallen
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by wheels on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 03:30:02 PM AEST
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It is a very interesting write with such sad remorse. Being left so lonely screaming within the confines of our own desperation. Well written
--Kevin
the lonely vagabond |
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Re: Fallen
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by KY on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 11:55:51 AM AEST
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i love it.
im not as creative as you are...
you are am amazing writer |
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Re: Fallen
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by texasw97 on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 10:02:13 PM AEST
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| i like this one too. I can't wait to see what you have for Septemeber. Take care |
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Re: Fallen
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 11:48:23 PM AEST
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compelling stuff here... maybe someday u two will reunite (if this is non-fiction)
take care
-K.Z. |
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