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Fluid Shadows
Contributed by
wheels
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Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 08:56:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Her hair is woven
Softly in my thoughts
Windswept lace
Weeping languidly cross her lips
Lost within a loosely liquid smile.
Light drips lonely from dimples shadow
Curving in svelte tracings down her neck
Around her supple breasts
As shadows flicker fluid
Flowing through the blue-moon darkness
Wafting smoke-curl lovely
To the rising of her sighs
In a brilliant blue sadness.
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wheels
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2008-06-26 08:56:28]
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Re: Fluid Shadows
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 10:03:28 AM AEST
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Lovely descriptions... enjoyed this..
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Re: Fluid Shadows
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by shelby on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 01:08:03 PM AEST
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Sighhhhhhhhh god this is incredible.
I am going to read it again, it could be a song.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Fluid Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 01:22:00 PM AEST
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Kevin,
This piece sings of pure beauty.
Awesome write...........Mike |
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