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Love Me No More
Contributed by
Rage
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Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 01:07:05 PM in AEST
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~*~
When Im in your arms the world ceases to exist.
The taste of your kiss is the one thing I just cannot resist.
My body yearns for your single touch,
But my broken heart hates you oh so ***** much.
You toy with my emotions, its all just a game.
You ***** with my head, Im just another dame.
I wish I never fell for you and given you my heart.
I wish I wouldve known you were no different from the start.
My dreams were crushed, flattened, demolished to dust.
By a love who seemed so caring, a person who I thought could trust.
Never mind the risk we both daringly went through.
Never mind the sacrifice I would have given for you.
Bittersweet memories are all that remain,
And thoughts of you are driving me insane.
Return the broken pieces that you chose to ignore.
Release my heart and love me no more
~*~
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Re: Love Me No More
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by Eclipse_of_the_Moon on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 01:15:43 PM AEST
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I know how you feel!
I hope you get better soon.
also a very good poem. |
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Re: Love Me No More
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 02:12:22 PM AEST
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Hey Rage!! Great to see you posting again.. even if it is a sad poem... venting helps...
Good write...You're not a bit rusty....
I hope all is well with you....
Miss you....
Jenni_K |
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Re: Love Me No More
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by wheels on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 03:17:50 PM AEST
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Hey - it defintietly geta the point across. Wow - if we would not hurt. I would do anything to feel my wife love me once more - but she is in another mans arms - I have been betrayed in the worst ways imaginable yet the feeling of such disregard hurts most since my heart is still not mine. I feel so deeply for you. You write wonderfully.
--kevin
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Re: Love Me No More
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 08:56:26 PM AEST
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Though sad and painful...this was brilliantly written..And I agree with everyone else that you are not rusty. Good job. Welcome back
Rich |
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Re: Love Me No More
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by shelby on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 12:12:39 PM AEST
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You touched each heart that read this.
I relate to your feelings as well.
Written with the touch of a true poet.
I hope your pain subsides.
Michelle |
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Re: Love Me No More
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by Clown_Prince on
Sunday, 6th July 2008 @ 09:00:14 PM AEST
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| Indeed, it has been a while since you've written a poem, Grace, but I don't believe you're rusty at all. I'm sorry that you have to deal with such heartbreak. This poem certainly expresses your pain and anguish very well and I don't believe you deserve to go through such an ordeal. I hope that in time you'll be able to regain and mend those broken pieces and be whole again. |
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