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~The Play Has Ended~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 06:15:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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~~^~~
The Play has ended
The actors have played their parts.
And always at the finale'
Some leave with broken hearts.
The Play has ended
The unraveled plot is done.
She certainly has no regrets
It has all been so much fun.
The Play has ended
The lead actor has left.
And one of the actresses
Is now bereft.
The Play has ended
Her services are no longer required.
She treasures the time
When once she was desired!
The Play has ended
The curtains are now drawn.
The stage has been cleared
The actors will soon be gone.
The Play has ended
She has had her time of glory!
It's time for her to move on..
But that's another story!
~~^~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-06-27 06:15:22]
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 06:26:41 AM AEST
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Another story there will be for sure. One just as great as the first.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 06:32:00 AM AEST
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I see what you mean with my latest poem being similar to this. You did a wonderful job..lets hope that there is another play...one more final act.
Brilliantly done as always.
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 09:57:25 AM AEST
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Oh Jen this one is incredible. I also state the show must go on one more act please with the happy ending.
Hugs
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 11:12:42 AM AEST
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Hey Jenni,
First: There is so much understanding where you sit and hopes of new things to come. Perfect write.
Second: I wish you all of my best and lets hope the next play is a fairy tale as the two of you ride of into the sunset.
Mike |
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 12:42:49 PM AEST
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wow this is like a life unfolding.. great wording and i loved the flow
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 12:25:40 AM AEST
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I really liked this one! Such a sweet, and quite a sad but hopeful story,
2sdy x |
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:05:45 AM AEST
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Joins the crowd in rising up and cryiong "ENCORE!!"
I see both sadness and the beginings of renewal here. On with life! |
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by holy on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 02:01:26 AM AEST
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| Great job! Dear sister, I will waiting for the another story..... |
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 12:22:44 PM AEST
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Excellent play ..... on words hun!! :D
Wonderful piece of poetry this. A masterful flow with perfect rhyming
and executed thought. The cadence is almost soothing; enough that the
reader almost doesn't notice the melancholy feel that floods the words.
Lovely post, dear Jenni. Painfully beautiful ~
~Breezy
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by holy on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 03:05:08 PM AEST
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| What is up? my dear sister, miss you so much, and wish you all the best. |
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by ZiggyB on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 10:25:29 PM AEST
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Jenni,
Your last few postings seem to leading to something. Stay focused because you have many friends here at YPDC. Peace is in the writing.
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by wheels on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 02:42:19 PM AEST
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Very well written. Sad but with hope.
--Kevin
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Re: ~The Play Has Ended~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 04:35:48 PM AEST
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She treasures the time When once she was desired . . .
This line is remarkable, i was realy close to the screen when i was reading your poem,i
can tell you it had an astounding emotional
impact on me, i was suddenly wisked away
to a yesterday long gone i keep inside of me. quite needless to say, your a true craftsman as well as a prestigious poet and artist, in your expert delivery. One could only hope to acheive a mere resemblance, in obtaining
a noticable place, in your leauge . . .
thank you Jenni for your read aslo, it's most
appreaciated as always . . .
Ben . . .
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