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Child's Play
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LoveStruck_Hippie
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Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 07:18:28 AM in AEST
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How is a heart to heal
When the mind will not give in
Holding on to vivid pictures
Of loves most painful sins
Trust betrayed, security smashed
Hopes and dreams destroyed
Lifetime of promises broken
My heart a childs toy
Cast off without regard
Pieces strewn about the yard
Each tiny little memory
Left dying on the ground
My love beaten and forgotten
This heart it does still hope
Each piece will be gathered
By one who holds the rope
Peace
~Shannon
06/25/2008
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Re: Child's Play
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by wheels on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 08:08:45 AM AEST
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You have captured my emotions... the ones I have had for the last few weeks... I had really lost hope, but have had a glimmer of it today still held precariously in a line tossed my way. It is very a very emotional piece.
--Kevin
the lonely vagabond
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Re: Child's Play
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 09:55:38 AM AEST
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Shannon,
this left a few tears in my eyes. I wish I was three hours closer we would be together right now I would be hugging you.
You captured the deepest of your heart and soul in this write. The picture speaks on its own as well.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Child's Play
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 11:07:25 AM AEST
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| Wow Shannon, this piece is so painful, yet so beautiful...Great write..............Mike |
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Re: Child's Play
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 06:42:37 AM AEST
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Oh sweetie ... how desperate love feels at times, I know.
I love how you wrote this. The first stanza is brilliantly crafted and
exceptionally emotive, especially the last line. I understand what
it is to hurt in this way and my heart goes out to you. It is so torturous
to pick up the pieces of a broken spirit and try to fit them together again.
Kudos to you. For your talent, your bravery, your strength ~
*hugs you tons*
~Breezy |
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Re: Child's Play
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 03:38:02 AM AEST
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Sad and Beautiful at the same time. Wonderful piece.
Deadwriter
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Re: Child's Play
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd July 2008 @ 04:45:11 PM AEST
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So full of emotion there, Shannon. Very well done. I honestly hope things get better for you.
Tim
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Re: Child's Play
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 05:43:07 AM AEST
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Truly beutiful though sad, i can relate with this
unfortuneately, with my own child hood, may
peace fill your heart and love come your way
for ever . . .
Peace to you also my friend
thank you for reading poem,
i appreciate it . . .
Ben
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