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I Love You
Contributed by
blk_woman4u
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Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 09:49:19 AM in AEST
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I stand before you with my heart in my hands.
Nevermind the scars and the wounds that have not yet healed.
The missing pieces, or the thorns that have begun to grow around it.
Or even the knife that you see sticking out at the back.
You see, i got it from a friend of mine...no sentiments attached.
The latest to my injuries though, is that little arrow in the middle
of what's left of my heart.
The kid who did it said that all was not lost.
He described a young man to me, said i should give it to him...
he would know what to do.
So here i am...
my heart in my hands,
because that young man is you.
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blk_woman4u
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2008-06-27 09:49:19]
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Re: I Love You
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 12:04:16 PM AEST
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Awww this is very cute..... I especially loved this line-->
"The latest to my injuries though, is that little arrow in the middle
of what's left of my heart."
Welcome to YPDC...Hope to see more of your work..
Jenni
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Re: I Love You
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by shelby on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 11:45:26 AM AEST
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Heart felt write here. I enjoyed it.
Welcome to ypdc
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