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I have a good idea
Contributed by
holy
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Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:56:21 AM in AEST
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I have a good idea
Tomorrow will be our baby's achievement of month of life,
I am going to work after tomorrow,
but I know you don't hope I go to work early.
I will well prepared for it,
don't worry.
I have a good idea now,
I am going to live in my mother's house with you.
you know,
my office is just under ten minutes to make a round walk from mother's house,
if we live there,
I can feed my milk to our baby better.
Yesterday,
you told me you had make enough money for the party of tomorrow,
I was gald to hear that.
when you come back,
I will tell you my thought.......
I don't hope you are too tired and busy,
please let me bear everything with you,
I am ready,
no matter what you will say.
Look,
our baby is asleep,
maybe he is in his sweet dream.......
All our family said our baby is the model of you,
haha, take a look,
really, really!
I am happy now,
I am kissing him on both cheeks,
I am appreciating his poetic face.
Look,
he is cast in your mold!
Look,
the two silly eyes,
the one funny nose,
the one big mouth,
the lovely face.......
Copyright ©
holy
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2008-06-28 01:56:21]
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Re: I have a good idea
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by deadwriter on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 04:43:36 AM AEST
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very nice write
deadwriter
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Re: I have a good idea
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 05:55:01 AM AEST
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Awww such a happy write, Holy.. I feel your excitement....I will e-mail you later on this write..
Hugs
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Re: I have a good idea
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 07:00:06 AM AEST
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a genuine, heartfelt poem for your offspring / spouse. good luck to u and ur family. =)
-K.Z. |
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Re: I have a good idea
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by elle on
Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 11:52:25 PM AEST
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| such a beautiful expression of love. . . peace. elle |
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