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You agreed with me
Contributed by
holy
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Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 02:10:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You agreed with me
When I told you my thought,
you smiled,
"Great idea!
I am sorry you went through hardship with me.
But you will get very busy and tired,
I am afraid things will tire you out."
I was pleased to heart that,
"it doesn't matter.
You know,
I like my work very much.
Hardship disposes us to meet adversity,
I have got used to this kind of life,
I am sure we will have a good time."
You finally agreed with me,
"Indeed,
it is very good idea,
you can take good care of your family.
Ok, I will follow you,
don't worry."
I was too excited to give my arms round your neck,
You winded at me,
"Look,
our baby is looking at us in perplexity.
Believe me,
I will try my best too.
haha, lovely baby,
are you ready to live in your grandmother's hoom?"
"How great!
thank you my sweet."
I greeted you with a loving kiss,
" Quite frankly,
you are right.
All for our baby,
all for our family."
Ok,
as long as we are together,
everything will be ok.
I see,
all I have done is in the interest of the family.
In order that our baby can live a better life,
I have to work hard and more.
I'd like to wish us every success,
I will do everything possible to help you.
Money isn't everything,
but I thank you for everything.
Copyright ©
holy
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2008-06-29 02:10:46]
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Re: You agreed with me
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by spooky on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 12:07:31 PM AEST
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money isnt everything but helps with the need in life,, but love is more important,,
well written a friend in words ,,spooky |
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Re: You agreed with me
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by GreenEves16 on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 12:14:11 PM AEST
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| i believe that without love, what is the point? i mena yes you need money, but when you run out and feeling down who do you want to be there for you? nnothing? no you want someone that will stand by you even if you are by no means rich, someone that just loves being around you for you not your money. |
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