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wheres the dreams
Contributed by
spooky
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Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 11:57:12 AM in AEST
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wheres the dreams when one needs them the most,,
to feel wanted, to feel love, to see what life had to offer,
wheres the hope that we always believed in,,
that time had everything to give without asking,
I always believed in dreams that anything was possible, part of me still does,
but sometimes i don't know anymore,
all we ask for is the little things in life,
nothing more, nothing less,
but its nice to see or have,
It's that sometimes we want to give up,
but our hearts say no, we still have something to fulfill in life,
no matter if our dreams come true anymore,
we still have words to share,
letters,, poems,, no matter,,
we have friends who will be there for us no matter what,,
thank you my friends in words
craig s. meeks
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Re: wheres the dreams
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by GreenEves16 on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 01:01:58 PM AEST
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Re: wheres the dreams
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by shelby on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 02:12:56 PM AEST
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Craig,
you captured so many things we all hope for or wish for. Sometimes I think we try to hard because when we slow down we see the little things that make up for some we feel we lack.
Lovely write
Michelle |
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Re: wheres the dreams
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 03:20:33 PM AEST
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I hear ya, friend.
Youtouched on the whole matter pof things when you wrote this:
we still have something to fulfill in life,
no matter if our dreams come true anymore,
we still have words to share,
letters,, poems,, no matter,,
we have friends who will be there for us no matter what,,
I write to live.
Huggs, smiles, friends,
emy
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Re: wheres the dreams
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 03:55:10 PM AEST
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Thank YOU, Craig, for being a friend..and for sharing this...I do so want to give up right now but I know I can't... even though I cannot see/understand what it is I want or need in my life right now.
A mind-blowing poem....which has me pondering...
Thanks for your PM...It goes both ways...
Jenni |
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Re: wheres the dreams
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by holy on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 02:58:58 PM AEST
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| Great job, I love it.Yes,, it is really nice to have our own dreams, them fill our life always, and give us a fresh and wonderful feeling, even if they are empty fantasy...... |
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