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Serendipity On Our Side
Contributed by
wizard
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Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 01:02:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Its all I needed, a word or two
Or to feel your sacred touch.
Unreachable through the ado
As fantasies stir; dreams and such.
Small talk often made, here and there
As hours pass and colors blend,
Carrying on without a care,
As splendid careless thoughts transcend.
Its all I needed, thoughts as sure
As your smile across the sky,
Or your shining eyes; such allure
Or a breeze as pure as your sigh.
If we could set aside never
And endlessly remain entwined,
Maybe it could be forever
If just the moment we could find.
If we could suspend disbelief
Time would cripple as fate endures,
Tainted hearts will regain relief;
Another day we would procure.
And so our fateful paths have crossed
Unto this hold we shall abide,
Without another moment lost
With serendipity on our side.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2008-06-29 13:02:54]
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Re: Serendipity On Our Side
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 04:22:14 PM AEST
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It's good to read your work again, Wiz... I've always enjoyed it...and this one is no different... I will have to do some back-tracking soon....
Jenni |
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Re: Serendipity On Our Side
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 05:29:40 PM AEST
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wow friend,
You mesmerized me with th title and kept me that way and left me screamin, more please?
big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Serendipity On Our Side
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 11:25:47 AM AEST
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i send a smile across the sky too and a kiss on the lips that you recitteed this with. this is a moving write and makes me fall in love. I melt with the worlds and would kiss any poet who writes with such flair. your eyes on wonder into the head of the universe turn me into mush and i am alone on the floor waitng for more of your wisdom shouting for more turning into chant into a welcome throw of deep enchantment. thanks dear poet wizard for casting your spell. i look forward to reading more of you, much, much more. welcome to ypdc.
William |
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Re: Serendipity On Our Side
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 09:04:28 PM AEST
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The wizard is back with his magic wand
If we could set aside never
And endlessly remain entwined,
Maybe it could be forever
If just the moment we could find.
These four lines made me feel so many emotions Incredible write...........Mike |
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Re: Serendipity On Our Side
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 09:51:28 PM AEST
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| I have no comment that can do this justice. Just wanted you to know I've read and it's beautiful. I think I'm going to need a thesaurus so that I can come up with more words than "beautiful" for all of your pieces :o). |
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