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Alone with You
Contributed by
wheels
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Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 01:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The T.V. cracked familiar shadows across your face
Are you listening?
I really need to talk and.
Are you listening.
I stubbed my toe
On great pink elephants
Crossing the yard
While coaxing the neighbors kangaroo
From the strawberry tree
Wont you listen?
Please?
I love you
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-06-29 13:33:45]
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Re: Alone with You
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by shelby on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 01:37:48 PM AEST
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LOL you are so dang funny I needed this tonight.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Alone with You
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 03:45:12 PM AEST
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yOU CRACK ME UP BUT i RELATE TO YOUR WRITING.
wOOPS,my computor has it's own mind jus like my tv.
More Please?
smiles, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Alone with You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 05:23:25 AM AEST
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lolz this is pretty funny and delightful.. enjoyable read
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Alone with You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 11:21:58 AM AEST
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| on the bus go rond and rond with deep and lovely and truth wait for it and it will roll into your wonder. |
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Re: Alone with You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 08:57:20 PM AEST
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| This is so true. Perfect write..........Mike |
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