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Wolves Too Lonely to Cry
Contributed by
wheels
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Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 01:40:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Cars drift by humming
From someplace past
Another soon to pass
No place past I recall
cept where rain storms fall
With tides ever pushing
Crowded no place going
As nature nearby taunts
On pine-wood winds
Whispering in wolf-call howls
Distant and lonely.
Not all wolves seek social pain
There are those with gray eyes
Who travel distant
The wild call
Of snowbound valleys
Much too gentle for common rumors.
Though,
Nature does not mind
She understands
Sighing as she lies down gently
Her snow silk shawl
Slipping slender from her shoulder
Her hands held out with open arms
Not always gentle
But always there
For wolves too lonely to cry.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-06-29 13:40:10]
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Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry
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by shelby on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 03:10:08 PM AEST
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Soft and beautiful write I loved it with the wolf in it nice touch.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 04:49:08 PM AEST
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ah oooooooooooooooouuuuu.
As you see, I luv this one.
I even howel at the moon at times.
Beautifull.
huggs, smiles, howels,
emy |
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Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 05:21:58 AM AEST
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a very powerful expressive write.. lovely
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 07:00:11 AM AEST
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I believe you captured the soul of the "lone wolf" exceptionally well
with this. (Whether intended or not). What a perfectly sad and torturous
line ...
"For wolves too lonely to cry"
I'm just stuck there. It's ... I don't know, just too damn painfully beautiful.
The metaphor in the second stanza is wondrous. Though it pains me to admit
it, you are right.
Sometimes solitude is our only comfort.
Hoping peace finds your heart ~
~Breezy
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Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 08:54:06 PM AEST
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| Such deep sadness and pain in this piece. Yet written with such wonderful lines. Great write.........Mike |
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Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry
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by Crow on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 01:05:09 PM AEST
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| I can Imagine gray eyes looking to break" we are not always where we want to be. I can imagine their silence, they would leave no evidence in leaving..this is what i`ve taken from your write...way cool. Crow |
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