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amanda
Contributed by
pipesmcgavin
on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 05:08:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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that rocket sailed into the heavens
i wonder what he saw as he rose
the sun twelve minutes past meridian
and not a cloud in the blue sky
and he arched back down to earth
from zenith to nadir,
nadeer,
nathir
along gravity's inevitable rainbow
i wonder what he saw then
the brown horizon
that gray blemish our camp
and did he see you?
a sand, at first, on the beach
growing bigger, and bigger, and bigger
but really, i want to know, did you see him?
did you?
out of the corner of your eye
the reflection on his aluminum jacket
a glint from the blue as time stood still?
did you see the needle from heaven
that brought you to hell?
i'm sorry i wasn't more help that day
baby, you had me at a loss
when i held you
you were upside down
and your eyes were open
did you see me?
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Re: amanda
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by GreenEves16 on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 04:21:27 AM AEST
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| oh my god this poem is really good, you....sort of seem a little sad in it though |
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