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Turmoil Abounds, The End Approaches
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 12:32:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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An empty page stares back with soulless eyes
As thoughts and memories do under flawless skies
Because in the world that abounds what are truths but rectified lies
And with a pricked finger thoughts flow as the mind withers and dies
And no clouds give rain as the land cracks as it dries
With days passing Time and Death sit at the table to negotiate a compromise
And their final decision as it is cast to the heavens should come as no real surprise
As immortality to embrace ever so diligently man so incompetently tries
An endless dream that has taken a life while a wife and children shed tears with their cries
So it is with their broken hearts that with his demons he spreads his wings and flies
Among the stars he waits for answers but there are no replies
As Hell laughs and Heavens silence is heard through sorrowed sighs
So it is with his heavy heart he gives everything of this earth for his Heavenly prize
For angels shall rescue him and wing him home and finally sever all earthly ties
2008
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ingeniusidiot
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2008-07-02 00:32:32]
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Re: Turmoil Abounds, The End Approaches
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by GreenEves16 on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 05:14:59 AM AEST
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| wow thats all i can say wow |
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Re: Turmoil Abounds, The End Approaches
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 05:15:44 AM AEST
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Rich,
this touched the heart it is nicely written but the shades of sadness bring a tear to the eyes.
I wish you and the family the very best and it will all work out I know it will. You love deep that hold a lot in itself.
Sorry you are sad though dang it.
I will have you smiling soon!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Turmoil Abounds, The End Approaches
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 11:20:56 AM AEST
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| Wow is right. There is so much pain yet hope in this piece. Hold on my friend.............Mike |
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Re: Turmoil Abounds, The End Approaches
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 05:37:30 AM AEST
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Amazing piece of work Rich. Great job
Deadwriter
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