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Miracles Happen
Contributed by
GreenEves16
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Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 05:34:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Everybody get a gift gets a hug or maybe
Even a kiss, I am waiting for my own my very
Own gift, I didnt get one I never have waiting
Alone can get so lonley
Longing is a sin but so is ignoreing my feeelings
That constantly die, Sweet tender feeling's
Are shared among many, but i am not one of them
I sit and wait for someone, anyone, my white knight
To come along and look into my eyes and see mey
True soul and see me for who I really am and pray
To meet identicle look's
Meeting my eyes they say the same thing
They greet me and laugh inside, Crinkles the
Corners you know he means the best for you
When the time comes, you feel it inside that he
Loves you to
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GreenEves16
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2008-07-02 05:34:14]
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Re: Miracles Happen
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by lildancngurl on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 06:15:22 AM AEST
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This is really good, Olivia!
I've gotta hand it to ya, you really surprised me.
:)
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Re: Miracles Happen
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 11:09:46 AM AEST
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There is such deep sadness and longing in this piece.
"When the time comes, you feel it inside that he
Loves you to"
This brings out the emotion of hope. An end to the longing and sadness.
Perfect write............Mike
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