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midnite rainbow
Contributed by
spooky
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Thursday, 3rd July 2008 @ 01:20:05 AM in AEST
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rain showers in the day, seems so beautiful,,
rainbows show their colors,,
sometimes in twos,,
but where is the beautiful rainbows at nite,,
silly me,,no sun,,
full moon could shine,,no,,
to many clouds,,
still it would be nice to see
a rainbow at nite,
life it self is the same,,
there's two,,the good
that we enjoy in life,,
then the bad,,
we wish we could change,,
but like the rainbows at nite,
we can't make it happen,,
all we do is live the best that we can,
we struggle to live the best we can,
sometimes we fall,
but for some we have to get back up and start over again,
I will always fall ,,
I will always get back up,,
I will never give up,,
maybe one day i will see the,
midnite rainbow
craig s. meeks
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Re: midnite rainbow
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 3rd July 2008 @ 02:58:00 AM AEST
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Oh how I wish I could change some things right now.....but you are so correct--->
"we can't make it happen,,
all we do is live the best that we can,
we struggle to to live the best we can,
sometimes we fall,
but for some we have to get back up and start over again."
Thanks for sharing this, Craig...
Jenni
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Re: midnite rainbow
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by brew on
Thursday, 3rd July 2008 @ 04:38:23 AM AEST
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I love rainbows, and all the different colors. i wrote a write, about 3 yrs ago on the differential of the colors.Please read, and hope you enjoy. Its called Rainbows, listed in my poetry. Again good write
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Re: midnite rainbow
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by shelby on
Thursday, 3rd July 2008 @ 08:19:51 AM AEST
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Craig,
you hold a beautiful poem and message here.
I am with Jen I wish I could change some things right now in a huge way but I need to keep doing best I can.
Let it fall into place I suppose.
Great write
Michelle |
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Re: midnite rainbow
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd July 2008 @ 10:15:25 AM AEST
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Craig,
Very nice, very nice.
It's true, life is full of ups and downs,
but how you approach situations tells the
type of person you are. Loved the last stanza.
Life is a fantasy, it is what you make it. Great
write...............Mike |
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Re: midnite rainbow
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 02:37:49 AM AEST
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A piece filled with hope, strength, and conviction ...
I am sure you will one day see your midnight rainbow.
Nicely done my friend.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: midnite rainbow
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 09:42:59 PM AEST
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Bravo! Beautiful write...
Thanks for sharing.
~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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