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~Roses Lament~
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 08:59:46 AM in AEST
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A gilded rose under moonbeams gaze
Sits and waits for true loves embrace
With ever saddening eyes patience abounds so there she stays
With her petals of flaxen satin and lace
She sways with the winds embrace
Faint star shine dancing on her velvet face
The shadows hide her sadness and disgrace
As she dreams of her true loves missing embrace
That gilded rose lost in her dreams she sits in a daze
As true loves whisper flows like a summers wind
While the sky changes from warming hues to chilling grays
So it is this dream that enables her to carry on as upon the same breath her love she does send
Her dreams she carries soft and sweet.
Sighing she thinks of her lovers scent
Within these realms she feels complete.
Holding her heart light to strings of sentiment
While words turn silent heart-strings keep her firmly on the ground
With only one thought flying free nothing forever more will matter
For within herself everything that once was lost has been found
As her tears fall at her feet and like glass they shatter
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-07-04 08:59:46]
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Re: ~Roses Lament~
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 09:28:49 AM AEST
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Lovely visuals my friend..... another wonderful write by you and Rich.. Keep the coming..
Jenni |
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Re: ~Roses Lament~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 10:52:38 AM AEST
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There you two go again.
Painting a masterpiece of words.
"She sways with the winds embrace
Faint star shine dancing on her velvet face
The shadows hide her sadness and disgrace
As she dreams of her true loves missing embrace
Just incredible words, incredible........Mike |
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Re: ~Roses Lament~
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 12:40:17 PM AEST
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Beautifully done and I really love the imagery.
I am with Mike, the second stanza just screams to me.
Peace my friends,
~Shannon |
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Re: ~Roses Lament~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 08:12:27 PM AEST
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We are regaining our popularity...Yes I think that we have created yet another masterpiece.
I think the title fits perfectly.
It is beautiful...Thanks Michelle.
Rich |
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Re: ~Roses Lament~
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2020 @ 10:00:32 PM AEST
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| Simply beautiful my friend. |
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