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BROKEN
Contributed by
Loende
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Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 09:45:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Things have altered and yet have not
And all Ive gained I now have lost
The wounds now heal, this I can tell
But still I live in anguished hell
I wonder now if it was real
Did I once love, did I once feel
And if I did was it the truth
Or just the rosy cares of youth
So time has passed, the days a knife
And I look back at empty life
Choices made and words unspoken
Have left a shell, a human broken
I wonder now if it will change
If I once Loved, could I again
And if I can, will it be real
Will it allows this heart to heal
So nows the time to look ahead
To waken from this living death
To leap into the great unknown
Head held high and arms wide open
I wonder Lord, so full of Grace
If you will guide me from this place
To soar on wings that set me free
And lead me to Loves destiny.
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Loende
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2008-07-04 21:45:29]
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Re: BROKEN
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 5th July 2008 @ 03:38:39 AM AEST
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A powerful and inspirational write.. Thank you for sharing this.....
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Re: BROKEN
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 02:30:18 AM AEST
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profound...i mite be going against my own religion (agnosticism), but i somehow believe it takes (someone/something) more than yourself to heal yourself. Things will change for the better. Love is patiently waiting, but it depends on the rite time i suppose. hope everything goes well for u. thanx for posting this. take care
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Re: BROKEN
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by ATG on
Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 02:56:16 PM AEST
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Loende my friend. I know how you feel. I think it hits on something that alot of people can relate to. That first 'love' and how nothing seems to be able to feel the same as that first one...
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