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No Right
Contributed by
inlovewithaladd
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Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 10:45:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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it rained for weeks
the air is heavy with the threat of it, even now
the puddles flash with the reflections of the streetlights
my hand on your arm
innocent and unsure
the hem of my pants kicks water into my shoes
our laughter rings out over the still water
we've stolen these moments, i have no right to
take joy in this
moments spent with you should be miserable and hated,
spent begging time to pass
as it is we watch late nights slip out of our fingertips
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inlovewithaladd
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2008-07-07 22:45:41]
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Re: No Right
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by wizard on
Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 10:52:37 PM AEST
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nicely done...
it seems that this is left open to several interpretations ... each one powerful...
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Re: No Right
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by Oceandreamer on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 01:10:15 AM AEST
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"puddles flash with the reflections of the streetlights"
Beautiful words...
Nice write!
Thanks.
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Re: No Right
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 07:05:49 AM AEST
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i love the roads that you open with this could be a series
great post
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