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I give up
Contributed by
moose2006
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Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 01:38:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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This isn't how I pictured my life
thinking about death and wanting to die.
I was happy and free like a kite
or so I thought but its only a lie.
It all started when I became a teen
and life got confusing and I felt blue.
everyone around you feels like their mean,
but really, they are just ignoring you.
On the outside I smiled a lot
but inside I frowned more.
I couldn't really connect the dots,
what was I living for?
Sometimes I would picture myself dying
and it actually would calm me down.
You still reading this, you think I'm lying?
I feel like I was beat into the ground.
I lie awake at night thinking it through
if killing myself would be wrong.
Do you know what its like to feel blue,
do you think I'm just singing a sad song?
Well tonight is the night you will see
I sit here telling you this as I cry
go on, leave, forget about me
because tonight is the night I will die.
The end!
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2008-07-08 13:38:38]
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Re: I give up
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 03:17:27 PM AEST
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a sad and profound poem. it may seem suicide is the answer to life's problems, but consider a place worse than the world we live in which we call hell, and imagine the pain you would leave behind 4ever to those who care bout u. u r important to people even if they dont say it. For me, i care bout my parents, but i don't say "i love u" to them like i used to. so don't giv up, it's too easy to do that. take care and hope things will be better
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