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Seeking the Unloneliness
Contributed by
wheels
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Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 09:29:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I see the unlonely
Sheltered from the rain
I see the lonely seek
The unloneliness
I see the rain with warm lights
Give reflection upon the pavement
Multi-colored footprints
Flow together
Some apart
And the humidity whets the appetite
While raindrop islands
Gather to conspire
Against the long hot dry.
Headlights come
Taillights leave
And some
They follow
Not letting go the wind that fills the sail
With a sweet warm caress
And curling sorrow.
The children play unaware
The rain that whets their hair
Muddies their cloths
While they dance and dance
Round and round broad sweeping circles.
She dances once again
Lonely seeking unloneliness
Arms outstretched begs of youth
To taste the rain free from tears
Yet no longer unaware
Of the rain that whets her hair.
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Re: Seeking the Unloneliness
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 09:49:52 AM AEST
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God this almost could make me cry.
Not letting go the wind that fills the sail
curling sorrow dang it.......... I feel it
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Re: Seeking the Unloneliness
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by brew on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 12:25:52 PM AEST
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The word I questioned in a comment I made, is it a true word...*unloneliness*. Wow ,you brought this write, to trueness for many. Wonderful job. It was felt with very in depth feels.
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Re: Seeking the Unloneliness
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by Tashy on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 04:01:05 PM AEST
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i was on the verge of tearrs
its absolutely beautiful.
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