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Nameless Love
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 02:05:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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There is no love;
not tonight.
not for you,
not for I.
There is no life
within your eyes.
Only pain
filled with lies.
Take my hand
and hold it tight.
Don't let go
in fear of light.
I just wanna be your girl tonight.
Copyright ©
Shattered_soul
... [
2008-07-09 14:05:12]
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Re: Nameless Love
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by Shattered_soul on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 02:14:25 PM AEST
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Everyone I re read this
and I wish I didnt put that line
in fear of light.
So ignore that |
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Re: Nameless Love
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 02:54:45 PM AEST
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i enjoyed your poem,
good job... keep writing
wiz |
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Re: Nameless Love
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by ZiggyB on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 09:04:26 PM AEST
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Not a bad poem.
If you need to change the last line, go into Forums, and the moderators can assist you with changes.
Good luck and keep writing. |
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