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~Beyond Despair~
Contributed by
shelby
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Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 09:50:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Have you ever felt like getting away
with really nowhere to go?
Felt alone inside your shell
each step you take a living hell.
When the world spins round beneath your feet
and the walls seem to crumble down around.
You look left then right but still feel lost
no marker to be found.
When you set your goals and see your dreams
only to have them all fade away
each door you open ten more close
there is no getting away.
When frustrations boils over
and you fall into a melting pot
with determination slowly fading
and you just at times want to stop.
Mourn the loss of another loved one
lost a bit more along the way
one foot infront of the other
hoping tomorrow comes is a better day.
Cry inside a swift drink of liquor
knowing it is just a temporary fix
the wanderlust reaches in
and wants to rip out your chest.
still feeling stuck somewhere beyond despair.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-07-10 09:50:51]
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Re: ~Beyond Despair~
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by spooky on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 10:39:50 AM AEST
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yes i know the feeling, when my mother died,
ii felt somewhat that way,I sorry for your loss,
a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: ~Beyond Despair~
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 12:39:13 PM AEST
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hugs
Shari |
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Re: ~Beyond Despair~
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by Tashy on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 03:50:37 PM AEST
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| wow, that was very emotional. its an excelent poem. im so sorry for your loss. and i have experienced that countless times. just keep on going. =] |
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Re: ~Beyond Despair~
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 06:37:55 PM AEST
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its never easy to feel so helpless,
big hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~Beyond Despair~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 10:27:43 PM AEST
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Another wonderful heartfelt and emotional piece. I guess this is the part of life that we all must learn to live with...it is also the hardest part, losing a loved one. Once again I am so very sorry for your loss.
~hugs~
Rich |
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Re: ~Beyond Despair~
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 01:45:02 AM AEST
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Michelle,
I really like this one. Oh how I know what it is to feel stuck. But, I do manage to keep the faith that tomorrow will bring a better day. My friend, some of this strength I can thank you for ... for when I have felt weak and alone you have helped hold me up.
You are an inspiration and a true friend.
Beautifully written.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: ~Beyond Despair~
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 06:11:24 AM AEST
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My Friend Michelle,
A write many of us can relate to. Very well done. You know as your friend I would walk every step with you to help you though.
Deadwriter |
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Re: ~Beyond Despair~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 11:17:30 AM AEST
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Michelle,
You know my prayers are with you.
Even through loss, you write such beauty.
Remember, you have wings and have taken
us all on your flights. I hope that soon, you will put those wings back on and soar high above it all..........Mike |
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Re: ~Beyond Despair~
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 01:40:01 PM AEST
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Oh Michelle, brilliant write in the face of pain and anguish... I am sorry for your loss and I hope you are feeling a little better now....
(Sorry I missed this... I wasn't home for a few days..)
Hugs
Jenni |
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