|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
~Forbidden love untouched~
Contributed by
shelby
on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 05:39:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
Dare we take the step down the opaque path?
Mixing our desires and our spiraling lust
Sweet kiss, oh yes, sinful poison from the moment
We surrender into fate; as the devil awaits smiling at the gate.
Secret moments stolen with brief encounters
Deliverance of two souls unrequited love
Adorned by the dance of passion, fanciful
Melting the petals round us, intense fire of passion.
Under the light of midnights sun
Within the embrace of a wanton need
As shadowing oak and pine keep a watchful eye
Whispering loves sweet melody upon the autumn breeze.
Enthralled hearts bound by love and lust become the symbol of ideal unification
No longer to fear as they sail upon a sea pure rapture and ecstasy
Basking in their evanescent glow as they rest in the fragrance of roses and morning glories
Surrendering to the moment, dreading the coming of mornings first light.
Copyright ©
shelby
... [
2008-07-12 05:39:56]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: ~Forbidden love untouched~
(User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 06:23:58 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This might be one of the better ones that we have written. Flowed very well together...Our ability to write together like this is almost a bit uncanny. I have to say that this is as beautiful as it is intense sensual. Thank you for writing with me yet again.
Rich |
|
|
Re: ~Forbidden love untouched~
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 10:21:57 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Michell/Rich,
I feel the heat from this one.
Deep with wantoness.
Awesome write...........Mike |
|
|
Re: ~Forbidden love untouched~
(User Rating: 1 )
by KismetsPoet on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 02:58:14 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very beautiful. Very passionate.
Great job. |
|
|
Re: ~Forbidden love untouched~
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 06:25:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a enchanting marvelous passionate deep felt write.. this is just great!!
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
|
|
Re: ~Forbidden love untouched~
(User Rating: 1 )
by recklessguy on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:02:41 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You two captured a rapture of emotion in here damn it.
Great work
me |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
