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Dreams
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
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Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 03:43:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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To my dreamworld, I escape
Floating through the sky
Find the rabbit, don't be late
What fun it is to fly
Forced back into reality
My dreams keep slipping by
Soothing water on my cheeks
My tears, I love to cry
Find my potion, drink it up
Look around with a sigh
Good-bye cold world, hello my dreams
How great it is to die
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Re: Dreams
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 04:33:00 PM AEST
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ahh a lovely piece of escapism here my friend, i thought the flow was spot on here and i was really sucked into it by the lovely pacing, i must admit it came as a schock that in the end it was about dying, really freaky lol, but i think you have made a link between dreams and death in that we dont fully understand either, though we are fascinated with both, great write here, really made me think!!!
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Re: Dreams
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 12:37:28 AM AEST
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| Excellent...... |
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Re: Dreams
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 02:36:48 AM AEST
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this is a great escape relality post.. It kinda gets you wanting to escape the real world every now and again.. great write
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Dreams
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by -Nik-91- on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 11:21:57 PM AEST
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wow another great poem you are really good
Nikki xxxxxx |
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Re: Dreams
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by wheels on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 10:00:22 AM AEST
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Very nicely written
kevin
the lonely vagabond |
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