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'Tough' Luck
Contributed by
shinji_kusa
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Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 10:44:47 AM in AEST
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Boy you dont how to keep me down,
They say there is a way that cant be found,
Nothing without the truth is ever sound,
Anything without wings is ever bound
Daddy dont you hold me,
Momma dont you cry,
Your son aint pluckin his feathers tonight!
Something around is in the air tonight
Cant tell if its wrong or if its right,
I never knew true love without my sight,
Baby dont be mad and start no fight
Shiela dont you scold me,
Baby dont you sigh,
Daddys gonna bring home the bread tonight!
I knew it all at once and thus I bought,
An object that could not seek nor could be sought,
I dont know what to do if I am caught,
My guess is that my fortune will be wrought.
Thank God for love,
And thank God for life,
Im going home to my beautiful wife!
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Re: 'Tough' Luck
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 02:33:33 PM AEST
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I like it very much Jason, and you're right it had a real rhythm to it........all through.
Keep up the good work. And try to fill in all the zeros would you? Then I won't have to do it!*smiles*
Enjoyed your poetry very much
Warm love
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