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Left behind
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 11:49:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Lies you gave
thinking I was a slave to your way
My life has changed
everyone and everything seems so strange
Stars will shine as tears fall from my eyes
you thought you had me trapped in your web of deceit
The truth is.. I don't believe you or anything you say
Vampyress Jenni
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Phantomvampyress
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2008-07-15 11:49:54]
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Re: Left behind
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 03:27:06 PM AEST
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Wow, once again i'm floored and it's been awhile but i remember a happier girl i'm sorry 4 your pain what ever's going on in your life, as usual this poem packs that good old
wollop i'm used to reading in your most eliquant style, welcome back and thank you for your read and comment again, all the best to you kiddo . . .
rock on likewise . . .
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Re: Left behind
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 09:42:48 AM AEST
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Intense write yes the betrayal of others can bite indeed.
hugs sweety
Michelle |
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Re: Left behind
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 02:13:11 PM AEST
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A painful write....but then, deceit is always painful.... Well done...
Jenni |
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Re: Left behind
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by holy on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 03:15:08 PM AEST
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| Thank you for sharing, I love it. |
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Re: Left behind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 10:50:37 AM AEST
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A strong and powerful write, hun. I love this line,
"Stars will shine as tears fall from my eyes"
....could transfer into so many meanings, no? Wonderful write!
Hoping for better days, sweets. *hugs*
~Breezy
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Re: Left behind
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by Crow on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 08:15:20 AM AEST
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damn thats real...Crow
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