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Morbid Have You Ever Felt Like...?
Contributed by
Cancer
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Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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have you ever felt like
the walls were caving in?
like your life was falling down around you?
like nothing really mattered anymore?
have you ever felt like
your best would never be good enough?
like no matter what you did,
somewhere, someone was doing it twice as well,
in half the time?
have you ever felt like
just simply giving up?
watching the world fade away
as you slipped into the sweet sleep of death
have you ever felt like
killing everything you love?
just so you could prove to yourself
that there is a sorrow deeper
than the one you feel each day?
just to know that it could actually get worse?
have you ever felt like
it's all just one big ***** circle?
that no matter what path you chose
you'd just end up back where you started,
alone, afraid, and weary?
have you ever felt like
opening a ***** vein
and drowning the world
in the deluge of your anguished blood?
slowly dying to the sweet symphony
of the pain filled shrieks of the earth
have you ever felt like
this is the way it will always be?
like, no matter how much you squirm
or how frantically you try to escape,
you will always be the bug under god's boot?
have you ever stopped and realized
that you were born to die?
that you are just passing through
on your way to "the great beyond"
on your way to the endless void
hurtling towards Nothing, one breath at a time
have you ever romanticized the thought of your death?
ever dreamed of what true suicide feels like?
not that near-death *****
i mean real no-turning-back suicide
that cold steel kiss on your soft warm wrist
the soothing sensation of being emptied
one slit at a time
and that satisfying knowledge you'd get
right as everything went grey
that this is the last moment of your life
your colorless, drying blood painting the floor
your lungs, struggling for needless air
your heart slowing,
sputtering towards it's final beat
the entire machine that is you
winding down
the last tear you'll ever be forced to shed
slowly climbing down your face
abandoning the sinking ship of your life
and just before the lights go out
staring at the face of Death
smiling
and saying
"i'm ready to go"
have you ever felt like that?
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-03-17 07:30:00]
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Re: Morbid Have You Ever Felt Like...?
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 08:29:24 PM AEST
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wow, this is an excellent, what a write, nooo i wouldn't kill everything i love to see how i'd feel; makes me think of my kids, dogs and loved ones in that, yet big yes's to many/most of the other things in this, that i've experienced at least in thoughts, lost 3/4 of my blood once, yes, it was a peaceful feeling but they brought me back around about a week later lol, that's how i want to go btw, this one really got to me, amazing write:) i also find interesting in this that 'god' is small and 'Nothing' is big, hugs nessa
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Re: Morbid Have You Ever Felt Like...?
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by mystical_illusion on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:39:44 PM AEST
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I know this poem was written a while ago but I'm just catching up on osme of the posts.
I think i must have said yes to ever question
Loved your words,
-kelly |
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Re: Morbid Have You Ever Felt Like...?
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:24:13 PM AEST
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| yeah...yeah i have...but no one should feel like this apart from me, the world doesn't deserve that...keep trying... |
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Re: Morbid Have You Ever Felt Like...?
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 03:23:23 AM AEST
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| i can relate to most of the things you said in your poem, keep writing because your poems could be the feelings of other people who cant explain them, so you've helped them out but your own writing.. |
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