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The demon in my head
Contributed by
moose2006
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Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 12:32:39 PM in AEST
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There is a demon in my head.
Who tells me I'm better off dead.
I know what he says isn't right,
but I'm too weak to fight.
Sometimes I believe what he says is true.
He says God turned his back on you.
He tells me that the world hates me,
oh why won't he let me be?
I try to ignore his voice
but he tells me I don't have a choice.
He says he made me what I'm today
and that I will never get my way.
Someday I hope to destroy him
but for now my light is dim.
I hope you understand and see
that the demon won't let me be.
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Re: The demon in my head
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 03:45:03 PM AEST
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I use to have the saME DEMON TRY TO LIE TO ME TOO. oops, didn't mean to holler.
in the first place he didn't make you any thing cause Jesus Christ died for us all.
He died so we didn't have to listen to demon's etc.
Rebuke the demon in Jesus name, Amen!
Tell it to go back to hell in Jesus name, Amen!
god allows us to rebuke the evil in Jesus name cause he knew how it would be.
luv, huggs, prayer, blessings, healing,
emy
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Re: The demon in my head
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:01:12 PM AEST
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this is incredible, i became sad as i read it.
i hope you find the strength to fight this demon, friend!!!
very cool poem, the rhyme and flow are all perfect, and the idea (while very sad) is a very cool one!
Never stop writing!!
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