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Sakura: The One I Loved
Contributed by
sylvias
on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 07:17:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sakura: the one I loved
In spring.
The cherry blossoms
invade the
sky like
pink
samurais.
Battles lost.
Tears shed.
Broken, the warriors
blanket the earth
in a million pieces.
In summer.
The cherries ripen.
The juice stains your lips
a sweet smeared rouge
the color of the pomegranates
that Hades fed Persephone.
If only she would stay
a little while longer.
If only I could touch you.
I think to devour your ripe lips.
In autumn.
The cherries fall.
Tumble to
the earth
red
Lucifers.
Tempt me.
Touch me.
More!
In winter.
Stark and naked,
the trees die
like the sentiment
that never escaped your lips
or the body
I never grasped
or even the tears
you were too proud to
let me see.
This is for you.
Shatter me still.
Copyright ©
sylvias
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2008-07-15 19:17:43]
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Re: Sakura: The One I Loved
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 12:30:19 AM AEST
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I absolutely loved this!! Loved how you structured the poem,... Well done...
P/S... I have always been fascinated by the name Sakura...
Jenni |
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Re: Sakura: The One I Loved
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 04:26:00 PM AEST
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| love the poem. great write. alot of thought and emotion expressed in such a lively brilliant tone. that keep the poems meaning to reader while still hinting what it was you were thinking when this was written. nice job. |
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