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Weather the Weather
Contributed by
midnight_writer
on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 03:20:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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i won't tell you where to go
i'm the one who needed a little direction
and now i can't tell
if the sky should be above or below me
but i was okay before
staring at the ground over my head
and the sky beneath my feet
it blends together well
into the same kind of summer
it all seemed okay to me
i promised it would rain that day
to you it didn't matter at all
just give me anything real
but nothing fell from the lazy afternoon sky
you just said okay
all the music that we heard
made life seem
like a soundtrack
everything made more sense
it seemed okay
what we wanted
so far never seemed to matter
as long as we could sit all night
watching the rain
we said wed be okay
im not trying to make this about you
but those lyrics all repeat themselves in my head
almost like youre the one who wrote them
you never lied to me
who said wed be okay?
im fine, youre fine
two fine liars
id be better, if the day it rained
it let me fade away
im fine, okay?
i believed you
can you believe that?
little more then half past midnight
wish for me
i wish itd be okay
doesnt it all seem so gone now?
but i still feel like ive been here before
its all different now
everything looks different now
doesnt look okay to me
this theme of weather we have
but i never saw the storm with you
it only rained when you were away
what are we gonna do?
were gonna be okay.
you had stormy eyes
yellow and green and colors i dont know
when lightning flashes in the sky
new colors created
more then okay
why do i do this- devastation, destruction?
and i dont know how
im worse then any natural disaster
to unsuspecting hearts
if i stay away ill be okay
a smile and a look
you saw through and read it
we dont even have to talk
then you looked at my eyes -
i guess we were never okay
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2008-07-16 03:20:17]
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Re: Weather the Weather
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 09:07:47 AM AEST
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Incredible write, placed a lot of emotions in this poem.
Well done
Michelle |
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Re: Weather the Weather
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 04:43:57 PM AEST
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| you seem to have alot of anger towards yourself. its a great write very detailed in feelings. but we can never say what we did was wrong. because we cant know the outcome had we done something different. so we should just move on make the best of what we are given. |
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