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Contributed by
rik18
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Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 07:14:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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red drips,
from my finger tips.
the crimson blades,
in different shades ,
the multiple scars,
pain from afar,
for multiple burns,
my lust yerns.
taken away,
my heart begins to sway,
my eyes closing,
my life loathing,
the demons winning,
my life loosing,
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2008-07-16 07:14:23]
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Re: unknown
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 07:16:49 AM AEST
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| Good flow. Powerful write. Keep it up. |
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Re: unknown
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 09:22:34 AM AEST
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This does have a good flow to it but the topic itself I am not fond of.
Will look for more of your work.
Michelle |
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