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Lost Cause
Contributed by
marie
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Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 02:32:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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War raging inside her,
Mind over body, heart over soul,
Left fighting alone,
While shes losing control.
She looks in the mirror,
And what does she see?
The face of a failure-
All she'll ever be.
Tears fall down,
Crashing to the floor,
Raising her hands to the sky,
She cant take this anymore.
Copyright ©
marie
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2008-07-16 14:32:02]
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Re: Lost Cause
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 03:01:45 PM AEST
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Hmmm.. Why you are writing about me....lol
Nicely done... I can truly relate...
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Re: Lost Cause
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 03:19:51 PM AEST
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| very nice poem great flow and connection through out. but she should not be so hard on herself. just remember answers only leave more questiones so. so remind her not to look for the answeres but search for the cure. |
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Re: Lost Cause
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 01:38:02 AM AEST
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Says a lot in a little space and all the more moving because of it.
Nice work
Steve |
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