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I'm Not On Myspace !!
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 01:29:52 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Like a horse led to water I'm pulled to your page
But the welcome is poisoning, not to my taste
The script self indulgence, its impact is flat
I have no compulsion to wallow in that
This virtual community spreads like a plague
Yet more invitations those spores from your stage
The aim is to lure but they only repel
I will not submit to this stereotyped hell
They seek to reach out but the target is missed
Monotomy mirrored by those on the list
I had this for breakfast, online diaries speak
I might have new shoes by the end of the week
Friends they collect to display to the world
Intimate personal details unfurled
Gone is the mystery, to strangers laid bare
Facts strewn to visuals everywhere
The concept I've missed of this networking vibe
Exempting myself from this huge cyber tribe
But the look of my latest blog won't cause me strife
As I'm not on myspace, its my private life
Copyright ©
puppy_dog_eyes
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2008-07-17 01:29:52]
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !!
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 03:06:37 AM AEST
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What an excellent piece, Steve... You tell 'em like it is..... really a waste of time as far as I am concerned...I'm not there either...
Jenni |
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 03:09:32 AM AEST
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Ha! I'm sure many could relate; although it shames me to say that I am on myspace. I feel I need to defend that I only have family members and close friends on there and it is a wonderful way to stay in touch, although I do miss the old days where I used to get letters. Good job!
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !!
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by eternalsunshine on
Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 09:45:36 AM AEST
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excellent, great words...
love, peace...;) |
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 11:04:20 AM AEST
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Wow Steve! This was so well done!!! I would be raised and applauding, but
I (like Jesseca) own a myspace page. lol You've done so well at showing the
negative side, (and it's THERE, for CERTAIN!), but there are some good things
about it too. Looks like you've just had the bad experiences. :( It's
not for everyone. LOVED the piece. Great work!! =)
~Breezy |
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !!
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by Crow on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 01:46:35 PM AEST
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| well I`m on my space too! I was bored the first day, I do drift there once in a great while, its remebers my password,,I can`t lol! |
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 07:03:22 AM AEST
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Well done and nicely put.
I have a myspace, but am rarely there. |
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !!
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by iloveedwardcullen on
Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 03:48:37 PM AEST
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Fantastic.
very very good.
;] |
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !!
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by Obscured_Existance on
Saturday, 1st August 2009 @ 04:12:33 AM AEST
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Great words!... Ummm just a quick question tho... "You on MySpace? " =oP lol
Par.xxxx |
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !!
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by muskiewoman on
Saturday, 28th November 2009 @ 09:00:24 AM AEST
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If you look diligently at all things in existence for a
moment you just might find something worthy.
For what is 100% agreeable at all times.
Rouse my mind.
Collette |
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !!
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by quadira on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 07:30:11 AM AEST
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| My views exactly. |
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 03:08:09 PM AEST
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Great points and I agree somewhat but I tracked down old friends and long lost cousins on social networking (Facebook).
Great poem though. Me likes.
You're on Facebook though...or someone stole your picture and name. :) So are a few of the commentators.
Take care and thank you. |
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