|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Sorrow of tomorrow
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 06:32:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
The sorrow of tomorrow.
what will it bring.
will it make me want to sing.
or just make my head ring.
day after day I wonder why I don't give up.
My life seems to be a ticking bomb.
The only reason I've made it is my mom.
Will my life explode when she's gone?
Just have to put one foot in front of the other.
But when I walk.
All I hear is tick tock.
Is the bomb about to go off?
Copyright ©
Voice of the Silent
... [
2008-07-18 06:32:05]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Sorrow of tomorrow
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 01:25:45 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
No there wont be a bomb.
I liked the poem, try to let things flow a little more...
I felt much sadness when reading this I hope you are happy soon.
Michelle |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
