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Only In dreams
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Outside pale blue
seeing no traces of who we once were
just the footprints on the steps left over
trying to cover up the scars, where it hurts
but it still bleeds where no one sees
begging to be seen
wounds like these only
heal in dreams
*Vampyress JENNI*
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Phantomvampyress
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Re: Only In dreams
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by britt8812180 on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:20:15 PM AEST
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| such a true meaning poem i like it a lot ^^ |
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Re: Only In dreams
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by wheels on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 04:20:05 PM AEST
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very nice Jenni. Short but nice imagery and the thoughts well written ...begging to be seen.
--Kevin
the lonely vagabond
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Re: Only In dreams
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 05:27:50 PM AEST
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| very expressive and emotional for such a short poem. I love the truth in it though the way it captures the reader attention while staying original. |
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Re: Only In dreams
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by emystar on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 06:00:20 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Only In dreams
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by Crow on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 08:02:16 AM AEST
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it still bleeds where no one sees
begging to be seen
I understand this perfectly. When I read writes that are short, quick and powerful I think of my friend that once told me..." the beautiful broken heart" Crow |
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Re: Only In dreams
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 02:15:07 PM AEST
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Oh Jen, outside pale blue
bleeds where no one sees god woman that is so powerful you captured such an emotional work here.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Only In dreams
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by holy on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:24:32 PM AEST
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| Thank you for your comment, I am happy to share your mood too. |
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Re: Only In dreams
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by wizard on
Sunday, 20th July 2008 @ 01:34:43 PM AEST
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great write...
the emotion shines through nicely....
wiz |
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Re: Only In dreams
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 01:19:59 PM AEST
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Amazing how one can say so much with so few words..... Well written, Jenni..
Jenni :>) |
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Re: Only In dreams
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 11:32:58 AM AEST
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| this is so sad, and gorgeous. you're very talented! |
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Re: Only In dreams
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:02:57 PM AEST
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wounds like these only
heal in dreams
So much said in such a short poem, brilliantly written |
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Re: Only In dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 10:49:09 AM AEST
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" wounds like these only
heal in dreams "
Jenn this is so touching,
you say so much so deeply
with your few words, but then
pain isn't hard to read is it
now? this is absolutely
stunning, as always your
style but most of all, the
artist that comes through
in your lovely tell all poetry . . .
Ben
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Re: Only In dreams
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 08:36:41 AM AEST
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Jenni~
An emotionally packed write you have
here dear poetess. You say so much
in so little words. You always deliver
a most powerful and meaningful write
dearest Jen~
I have missed you and your wonderful
writes my dear friend. Keep up the great work.
huge hugs,
sue m
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