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Silent Echoes
Contributed by
wheels
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Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 04:24:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Moments quiver desire
Lonely embrace of maidens dire
Passion crying on
Breaths numbly
Passing warm ghostly mists to the chill
Of night times depths
Drowning out the echo
Of his footsteps out the door.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-07-18 16:24:35]
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Re: Silent Echoes
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by emystar on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 04:34:28 PM AEST
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Well done, my friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Silent Echoes
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 05:11:02 PM AEST
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| good write. but dont think to hardly on writing it from females point of you. It means nothing other then your keeping an open mind and trying to see the world through more eyes then just your own. good job. |
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Re: Silent Echoes
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 01:56:59 AM AEST
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thsi is a good short expressive write.. it has that shakespherean feel to it in a sense.. I like this one alot..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Silent Echoes
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:18:41 PM AEST
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The very end just grabbed at me.
I agree it is nice that a man can stop and see things through a womans eyes that makes a man a man I think!
Another reason why I just love ya Kevin
Awesome write
Huggers
Michelle |
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