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kiss of spring
Contributed by
sunflower
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Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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warm amber honey
sunshine drizzles down.
beckoning daffodils
to awaken,
along with me,
to the first kiss
of Spring
Copyright ©
sunflower
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2003-03-17 12:40:00]
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Re: kiss of spring
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by Varro on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 01:21:25 PM AEST
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Just like you I can't wait for spring to come. Brief but loaded with great imagery and sentiment. Told with great feeling. Nice job.
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Re: kiss of spring
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by TFLM on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 02:05:32 PM AEST
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| Like it!. Doesn't faff about with pretentions and sweetly told. Brings a smile to my face. |
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Re: kiss of spring
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by dreadfulsuicide1570 on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 11:54:47 AM AEST
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| when i was a little girl i used to sit in the flower patches at my uncles cabin in vermont and in the spring the flowers were pretty and i can remember laying back in the flowers looking at the sky.......in such few word u brought me back there! i could feel the stems tickling my neck and arms ...... very beautiful |
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