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The Wendy-Bird
Contributed by
daniella
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Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 11:00:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Lost boys, half melted icecream, and marbles
That they can't seem to find
Strawberry hair that gleams in the sun
Lets go berry picking and make like it's simple again
And hold those glass spheres up to the sun
To watch the light pass through
And dance across each other's features
Then slide them under the door and listen to the sound fade
As they roll further away
Realize these are eyes that have only seen good
And ears that long for stories
"I do believe...I'll always believe"
Copyright ©
daniella
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2008-07-21 11:00:34]
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Re: The Wendy-Bird
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by carpediem on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 04:33:45 PM AEST
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| Great write, honestly one of the better poems i have read from this site. The flow and theme are perfect. real talent. |
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Re: The Wendy-Bird
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 06:24:28 AM AEST
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Nice read. Very summery and relaxed energy. I can picture the boys playing and moving about from spot to spot.
Thank you for the journey there....
Carol |
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