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emotions in art
Contributed by
breezyweezy
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Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 12:38:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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staring at this blank sheet of paper
not knowing what to make
i want to draw something wonderful
but theres too much to take
i start to draw unknowingly
of what it is i am creating
but to my surprise the picture isnt clearing
its fading
the colors smudging at my touch
the figure disoriented and obscure
paper tearing at the edges
i dont know whats happening, not sure
im feeling as though there is a picture
in this abstract monstrosity
i fear that the picture is a symbol of
how i feel for you, but now see it clearly
hidden emotions expressed in art
makes you wonder if you know who you are
but you knew those emotions long ago
u just pushed them away, only seeing them from afar
because you feared that u might create
something horrible
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breezyweezy
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2008-07-21 12:38:54]
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Re: emotions in art
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by wizard on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 01:51:08 PM AEST
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nicely done,
some more punctuation may help the reader along somewhat ... but i enjoyed it! good job,
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